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HP-35S 'Guide for Dummies' being posted online
04-19-2015, 08:43 AM
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RE: HP-35S 'Guide for Dummies' being posted online
(04-19-2015 08:02 AM)walter b Wrote:  Some remarks as I came across various points:
  • Introduction: "... (Google it)." If this shall be a verb it shall not be capitalized AFAIK. And there are, BTW, also other search machines.
  • "... results that have been verified regardless." ? Regardless of what? Verified by which means?
  • Last paragraph contains the reknown English "student" apparently meaning a person visiting a so-called highschool. "Student" is ambiguous though. I'd recommend looking for a better word.
To be continued.

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The renowned student is someone, any age, any etc, who wants to learn. If it's a problem, us monosylbs prefer "famed".
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